The Doomsday Drop

By Rob

The line was so long. I was in the line of the roller coaster that I would soon regret to go on. I heard moaning from the people that had just gotten off the ride. But I didn't care I would go on the coaster anyway. My mom wouldn't go on, she was too scared. My sister screamed " I want to go on the big ride."

I said, "No way you're to small anyway." The line was gone the next thing I knew I was on the ride, and I couldn't get off!

I heard a strange noise and I saw the floor dropping down from below the coaster. Then came the Clink, Clink, Clink. The clanking I hated the Clanking. I hated the highth of the thing I was in the front row.

At the Top of the coaster it seemed to slow down as I looked over the front. I saw the DOOMS DAY DROP and totally freaked. The coaster started to move it was picking up speed extremely fast then I saw the first loop we went up it and then after that everybody screamed. Then we hit a sharp turn and started going the other way. We went into a barrel roll Another loop And that's when the guy behind me let loose š and hurled. Every body behind me screamed and I thought I can't believe HE wanted the front. Then the ride was over I got off the ride feeling sick and thinking I got to do that again